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Why yes,
I'm a proud member of the bleeding hearts club,
And Say what you will
I'll never be crushed,
Not by you,
The broken doll,
You have no strength
Only spite,
Only harsh words.
They can't cut me because I remember,
And my memories give me the armor that I need
To become a white knight,
A clown in my own right,
And a moving target to distract from those
who can't withstand your harsh words…
and I'll always be waiting to challenge you.

Laugh, I know you want to.
And god knows you need it…
Found the pic here -> [link] I take no credit for it's creation.
I'm not sure whether to be proud or ashamed of this poem... It just flowed out, and that hasn't happened in a while, so I decided to post it.
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
Lovely work (I'm glad it flowed :)) I do have a question; in lines 5 and 6, "Not by you,/The broken doll," the wording is a bit confusing...are they the broken doll or you?
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I-Lost-My-Way Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, it's supposed to be referring to the people this poem was written about, for lack of a better word,"trolls".
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
Alright...I was just wondering...the poem is still amazing =P
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I-Lost-My-Way Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you! ;p
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LightOverpowers58 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Writer
You are welcome!
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Lordrevenge Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
love the picture and beautiful poem
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I-Lost-My-Way Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you.:aww:
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the last two lines. They carry somewhat of a playful apathetic tone which is spent on hard truths and reality, I love it.
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I-Lost-My-Way Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks! I think the last part is the only reason I haven't taken it down yet, to be honest...
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oi. I know the feeling. I always have the impulse to remove pieces I don't think are "good." Don't take it down, though, this is wonderful :tighthug:
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